Today I welcome guest author Emmie Dark to my blog! So over to Emmie...
Fake
it to Make it – Getting to “The End”
No matter what kind of writer you are—what genre or
style—writing the whole book, all the way through to ‘The End’ is a daunting
task. I think it’s even more daunting for romance writers, because so many
romance publishers ask for an initial three chapters as a submission. It’s easy
to get good at the first three chapters—and never navigate the choppy waters of
the middle or the end.
But if you’re serious about getting published, you
need to be able to write a whole book—all the way to ‘The End’. Here are a few
tricks that I’ve learned that have helped me get there.
Avoid
distractions
You’ve just
worked out that your heroine loves horses. In fact she used to have a horse
when she was a child. What kind of horse? You don’t know that much about
horses, but Wikipedia has everything you’ll ever need to know!
We’ve all been caught in an internet black hole. You
go searching for ‘Shetland Ponies’ and two hours later emerge with beautiful photos
of a New England-barn style interior décor and a knitting pattern. It’s been fascinating, but you haven’t got
anywhere near reaching your word count for the day.
Unless it’s central to your plot and you absolutely
cannot continue without knowing more, resist the temptation to go internet
surfing. That kind of research can be done at other times of the day (when
you’re watching TV for example) not during your precious writing hours.
Same goes if you can’t find exactly the right word you
want. Just type XX and move on. Come back to it later, when you’ve got time to
forage through Roget’s.
Write
‘as if’
A good friend and critique partner gave me this advice
and it’s been invaluable. I’m primarily a ‘pantser’—I tend to write the story
as I go, although once I get some of the way in and have a better idea of my
characters, I do tend to do a little planning.
But always, in every book, at some point in the story
something comes to light with a character or a plot point that changes
something I’ve written earlier. Sometimes it’s simple—a minor detail about the
character’s family or background. Sometimes it’s more complex—something to do
with the character’s whole motivation.
It’s tempting to stop at that point and go back and fix everything related to it in your earlier chapters. All this will do is slow you down. Keep going ‘as if’ you have gone back and fixed it. Make notes somewhere about what needs to be fixed so you don’t forget, but keep going. You’re going to have to go back and revise anyway (possibly multiple times!). So keep the fixing for all at once.
It’s taken me a long time to learn this lesson, but I’m convinced it’s speeded up my writing.
Turn
off the editor and write anyway
It’s such a common piece of advice given to new
writers I know I pretty much got sick of hearing it. “Turn off my inner editor?
Yeah right! You haven’t heard that voice nagging on and on and on…”
I understand, believe me, I really do! But you know
what? This is one of those times where you just have to do what your mother has
probably told you a hundred times: Put on your big girl pants and deal with it.
All writers, no matter how successful, have days when they wonder if what
they’re writing is crap. When it’s a struggle to get every word down on the
page. The difference between published authors and wannabe writers? Authors do
it anyway. There’s no, “I’ll wait until I’m in the mood tomorrow. I’ll write
better then.” Yes, you might. But you’ll have lost a day of writing. Yes, it is
easier to write when you’re ‘in the mood’. But as Ernest Hemingway (I think!)
said, “It’s easy to write. All you do it sit down at a typewriter, open a vein
and bleed.”
If you’ve never
made it all the way to ‘The End’, I highly recommend you give it a try. Not
only is it good discipline. Not only does it give you practice at writing a
whole book—practice you’ll dearly need once you’re published. It also gives you
the most inspiring sense of satisfaction. But I can’t tell you exactly how
wonderful it feels to type those words—you’ll have to find out for yourself.
Emmie’s
latest SuperRomance release "Just For Today"“ came out in June and is
available now online.
Emmie on the Web:
Ugh! I just lost my entire comment when my internet had a conniption. *sigh*
ReplyDeleteBasically I want to say thanks for sharing your wonderful insights, and it's been a good reminder for me to stay away from internet black holes!
Hi Lauren,
DeleteWe LOVE cyberspace, but usually when it behaves. I also love it when it DOESN'T distract me! Thanks for trying again.
Sorry to hear that, Lauren! Thanks for your comment -- and good luck with avoiding those black holes!
DeleteAll marvellous advice, Emmie! I too have to keep writing 'as if' I've filled in the missing scenes that have to happen earlier.
ReplyDeleteBut I'm pushing on to the end because I'm *nearly* there.
Hi Ebs,
DeleteI used to always write in a linear fashion — scene by scene — and I would be stuck when I didn't know what happened next. It was quite liberating when I began writing scenes that I knew were coming later on, so I got them out of my system and then continued. The trick is to check and double check continuity before and after.
YAY for almost being there. There is great satisfaction in typing *The end*. Thanks for stopping by.
I hear ya, Ebs! Being *nearly* there is a great motivation in itself! Thanks for commenting!
DeleteHand up here as a research time-waster :-) Thanks for a great article, Emmie. It's great to get back to basics.
ReplyDeleteHi Louise,
DeleteResearch is always such fun, but when the research overtakes the writing, you know you have a problem.
Thanks for dropping in.
I totally get the research thing. I'm so often tempted myself! And the whole of the internet is a very hard thing to resist...
DeleteHi Emmie,
ReplyDeleteGreat blog and some very sound advice. You can't edit an empty page, I don't know who said that, maybe it was you???? but it is so true.
Cheers
Margaret
Thanks Margaret! I think that's great advice! Not sure where it came from either, but it's worth listening to!
DeleteHi Margaret,
ReplyDeleteI think it was La Nora (Roberts) who is credited with saying, "I can fix a bad page. I can't fix a blank page."
Thanks for popping in.
Hi Emmie and Serena,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the 'as if" tip, Emmie. Until now I've been making the mistake of going back and changing details etc for a new direction or element unfolding in the story. I won't be doing that anymore. It takes hours of time, meanwhile my exiting new idea is languishing and I'm using up the energy that comes with this inspirational moment, on already written words instead of using it on getting the story out. Excellent.
Cheers
Dora
Thanks Dora! I hope it works for you -- I have to say that for me it's been a life-saver. Good luck with it all and thanks for commenting!
DeleteHi Dora,
DeleteIt seems that the *as if* tip is a real winner. Thanks for coming in.
Great post and thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteAs a pantser I get a lost at time and I love your 'as if'.
Cheers,
Margaret
Thanks Margaret! I hope it's a trick that works for you too. Good luck!
DeleteHi Margaret,
DeleteAnother vote for the *as if*! Thanks for stopping by.
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ReplyDeleteHi Serena, hi Emmie,
ReplyDeleteGosh, I'm very late coming in, but it's lovely to see you again, Emmie. Must look out for your book.
Good advice. I'm in complete agreement on plowing through and when you hit 'the end' go back and make your changes.
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